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Poem 3

Page history last edited by Fabian 14 years, 4 months ago

A Bicycle

By Fabian

 

So much depends upon 

 

a bicycle with out a helmet 

 

riding down the hill

 

crashing down, tears rolling on my  cheeks.

 

next poem 

 new one 

 

     BY Fabian Cortes

 

So much depends upon 

 

a cat that helps you

 

in a terrible house in the underneath

 

that gives you food 

 

but always loves you in this deep underneath.  

Comments (24)

June Shanahan said

at 4:04 pm on Jan 14, 2009

This poem has SO MUCH VOICE!

Jessica said

at 11:36 am on Jan 15, 2009

That has happened to me.

Alex said

at 11:37 am on Jan 15, 2009

that is awesome all the voice in the world must be in there.

glynnis said

at 11:42 am on Jan 15, 2009

i wish i had a bike!

Fabian said

at 11:42 am on Jan 15, 2009

cool!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chris said

at 11:44 am on Jan 15, 2009

Did this really happen? :O

glynnis said

at 12:22 pm on Jan 16, 2009

when iwas leaning how to ride a trainning wheel bike, i didn't know how to stop and then i crashed into the road head first!

glynnis said

at 2:15 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I'm very sure that the bike insident in the poem must of hurt!!

Samantha said

at 2:24 pm on Jan 20, 2009

You have a lot of voice.

Fabian said

at 2:24 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I know Samantha!

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:36 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like a bicycle part.

Aaron Castro said

at 11:45 am on Jan 21, 2009

You have alot of voice.

Aaron Castro said

at 11:46 am on Jan 21, 2009

Did it realy happend?

Barbara said

at 1:42 pm on Jan 22, 2009

That is so true!

Chris said

at 2:14 pm on Dec 15, 2009

that is a crazy good poem. i love the calico cat. its sad that she died... :.(

Jessica said

at 2:15 pm on Dec 15, 2009

That's so good

Sean said

at 2:16 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like how you chose to right about the calico cat.

Alex said

at 2:16 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The Underneath one has SOOOOOOOOOOOO much voice!
I still can't believe Calico Cat died!

Fabian said

at 2:22 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I did not know that this had voice Alex.

Paul said

at 2:27 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Sabine reminds me of puck...poor, poor, Puck

Aaron G. said

at 2:28 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The calico cat died in like chapter thirty something nut that's okay.

Nicole said

at 2:28 pm on Dec 15, 2009

So true! Awsome poem! :)

Aaron C. said

at 2:28 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I like the one about the Calico Cat.

Sharon Creech said

at 3:38 pm on Apr 1, 2010

Did you read UNDERNEATH? I loved that book, and I love your poems.
Your author,
xx Sharon Creech

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