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Poem 11

Page history last edited by Cienna 14 years, 4 months ago

Flashing Light

 all poems by: Cienna

So much depends upon a

flashing light

running through town on a

 dark night 

 

Sliver

 So much depends upon

a sliver of green going through the dirt...

as a ring

 

The Curve 

So much depends upon

a hook with a curve

on a cloudy day 

 

Colored Cloth

 So much depends upon

a colored cloth

hanging on a chord

 

Black Rectangle

So much depends upon

a black rectangle

with glass inside.

 

So much depends upon

a sheet with words

 

Next Poem

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The Underneath Poems

 

rusted chain 

So much depends upon

a rusted chain

pulling a dog

by the tattered neck

 

garface

not much depends upon

garface

with his rifle

about to kill

that dog

that dog with the

rusted chain... that dog

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (17)

Christine Bonilla said

at 11:34 am on Jan 14, 2009

I love all your poems, but I think the flashing light is my favorite. It sounds nice in my ears.

Jessica said

at 11:41 am on Jan 15, 2009

Nice poem.

Alex said

at 11:42 am on Jan 15, 2009

AWESOME!

Kailene said

at 11:42 am on Jan 15, 2009

All of them are cool

Emily said

at 11:43 am on Jan 15, 2009

All of them are cccccccccccccccccccccccccccoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kailene said

at 11:43 am on Jan 15, 2009

all of them are cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

glynnis said

at 12:23 pm on Jan 16, 2009

very flashy!:-)

June Shanahan said

at 7:25 am on Jan 17, 2009

I like the last line the best, because it cuts right to my heart. Words can change everything.

Samantha said

at 2:39 pm on Jan 20, 2009

I realy like the the second one any way I love all of them to.

Aaron Gondensen said

at 11:26 am on Jan 21, 2009

I like the flashlight part.

Barbara said

at 2:19 pm on Dec 15, 2009

Whoa, your poem is so true!!

Nicole said

at 2:24 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I love you poem about rangers chain

glynnis said

at 2:27 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I thought of the tattered part

Chris said

at 2:27 pm on Dec 15, 2009

that is so sad... but my favorite charater is ranger.

Anthony said

at 2:30 pm on Dec 15, 2009

The chains are so sad. :(

Anthony said

at 2:32 pm on Dec 15, 2009

I ment to say "the chain poem is so sad." :(

Christina R said

at 2:32 pm on Dec 15, 2009

wow!!

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